Why You Should Read America’s First Daughter

Historical fiction is not my favorite, so when I find a book in this genre that I like, I share it!  America’s First Daughter, by Stephanie Dray and Laura Kamoie, is a fascinating novel that explores the life of Thomas Jefferson’s oldest daughter Patsy.

At first, I worried about reading America’s First Daughter.  I am a graduate of Jefferson’s University, a frequent visitor of Monticello, and an avid admirer of Jefferson’s intellect, curiosity, and ingenuity.  I know he had flaws, but I feared the novel would irrevocably tarnish my opinion of him.  It didn’t.  It did, however, give me a more accurate portrait of this Founding Father and the contradictions and challenges that colored his life.

The Story

America’s First Daughter opens in 1781 with the Jeffersons fleeing their family home at Monticello to avoid capture by British soldiers. A few chapters later, Jefferson’s wife Martha becomes gravely ill, and before she dies, she begs Jefferson to never remarry and tells her oldest daughter Patsy to take care of her father.  At the tender age of 10, Patsy inherits the enormous responsibility of holding the Jefferson family together and protecting her father’s reputation.  This unusual position brought Patsy a lifetime of burden as well as privilege.

What I Liked

  • Every chapter begins with a snippet of a letter.  We know so much about Jefferson because he kept detailed notes and wrote many letters.  One such snippet, written by Jefferson in April 1820, reveals the inner conflict of the man who wrote the Declaration of Independence and who also depended on slavery for his livelihood:

There’s not a man on earth who’d sacrifice more than I would, to relieve us from slavery, in any practicable way.  But, as it is, we have the wolf by the ear, and we can neither hold him, nor safely let him go.  Justice is in one scale, and self-preservation in the other.

  • I learned a lot about history.  For example, I never realized that British troops threatened Monticello or that Jefferson suffered criticism for fleeing.  I also never realized the link, both timely and philosophically, between the American and French Revolutions.
  • Patsy Jefferson’s story is fascinating.  Jefferson gave her some access to and influence in the world of politics, unlike most women of her time.  And yet, she still faced enormous challenges serving her father both in public and private life while still managing a family that had many of its own problems.  Her father was the “author of independence” and yet she often felt trapped.  She says,

“… I never would have a say, because in the world…, men did as they pleased and women were left to simply accept the consequences.”

  • Since I’ve been to Monticello many times, I enjoyed reading about events that took place in the house.    I’ve stood in Jefferson’s office and other rooms at Monticello and could easily visualize scenes from the novel.  For a floor plan and photos of the rooms, visit the Monticello website.
  • I knew that Jefferson died in debt, but I never realized that it was largely because he was generous to a fault.  He took his role as public servant seriously and entertained a constant stream of visitors at Monticello.  He also took on debt to help and protect his extended family.

What I Didn’t Like

At times, the narrative felt slow, and it took me a while to finish the book.  That might stem from my lack of enthusiasm for historical fiction as well as my current state of fatigue. Also, at times the wording sounded melodramatic.  However, the authors used notes and letters from the time to replicate authentic speech for their characters.

My new view of Jefferson

America’s First Daughter deepened my understanding of Jefferson’s life and character.  The things I love about this great man remain, but he was by no means perfect.

On the issue of slavery, no one can deny the paradox of a man who wrote “all men are created equal” yet kept slaves.  Jefferson was a child of Virginia and believed wealth and stability were found in owning land.  He, like many Virginia landowners, considered slavery a necessary evil.  However, other Virginians, including his son-in-law Tom Randolph and close associate William Short, abhorred slavery and took steps to abolish it.  While Jefferson manumitted (released) several of his slaves, he always owned some, a troubling fact.

On the issue of his slave Sally Hemmings, DNA evidence suggests that Jefferson fathered several children with Hemmings.  His affair with her probably began several years after his wife’s death, when he was serving in France.  Hemmings was actually the half-sister of his wife Martha.  (Martha’s father had relations with one of his slaves, and Sally Hemmings was his daughter and apparently looked a lot like Martha.)  According to the book, it was not unheard of for men to have slaves as concubines or for wives to find slaves for their husbands so they wouldn’t have to bear too many children.  Nevertheless, the relationship is troubling on many levels, especially when one considers the power Jefferson held over Hemmings since he owned her and that she was close to his daughter’s age.  Patsy Jefferson spent great effort protecting her father from this scandal, however he faced criticism for it in the press.  In fact, Jefferson had many critics in his day, for the Hemmings scandal and other issues, something I never realized.

Recommendation

America’s First Daughter is a great read if you are interested in historical fiction, the Founding Fathers, or the role of women in the 18th and 19th centuries.  And if you are a Thomas Jefferson fan, don’t shy away from the opportunity to learn more about him.

Have you read America’s First Daughter or other books about Jefferson?  What did you learn?

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How Do You Pronounce Ciabatta?

A friend of mine packs yummy looking sandwiches for his son’s lunch. The bread is square and thick, golden on top, and looks delicious with a little ham, cheese, and lettuce tucked inside. I asked him where he found it. (In our little town, we only have Food Lion and Wal-Mart for grocery shopping, and neither one stocks exotic food.) He said it’s ciabatta bread, and he found it in the Wal-Mart bakery.

Wal-Mart? Who knew!

I’ve had this bread before, at fancier bakeries and restaurants , but I was never sure how to pronounce it. My friend called it “key-a-batta”. I thought it might be “che- batta” or “che-a-batta”.  My 14-year-old grew weary of my pondering and said, “Mom, just look it up.”

And so, once again, Merriam-Webster helped me clear up this word nerdy confusion, and I will pass on this knowledge to you!

Photo credit: Rebecca Siegel via Flickr CC-BY

Ciabatta \ chə-ˈbä-tə \ Italian, literally translates “slipper”;  a flat oblong bread having a moist interior and a crispy crust

So, when you want to find this delicious bread, ask for ciabatta (pronounced cha-ba-ta).

Word Nerd Workout

Do you enjoy a good ciabatta sandwich? Are there other foody words that give you trouble? Please share. And now I need a snack. 😉

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What Can We Learn from March Madness?

compete: to strive together

My bracket is in shambles, and this March is the maddest I can remember.  My beloved number one ‘Hoos have earned the spotlight once again, this time for a historic loss after a historically successful season.  They are the only number one seed to lose in the first round of the NCAA basketball tournament. 🙁

As Tony Bennett, head coach for the Virginia Cavaliers, pointed out in a press conference after the loss, “Good basketball knows no divisions, no limits.  If you play this game, and you step into the arena, this stuff can happen.”   And that’s what I love about competition: it shows us, with stark and sometimes painful clarity, what we have mastered and what we still need to work on.  If you have the guts to compete, you’d better be prepared to fail, but a good competitor doesn’t let one game or race or match define him or her.  A wise competitor embraces every success and failure as a chance to get better.

So, what are the lessons Virginia, UNC, and the other upset teams have learned at the hands of schools like UMBC and Buffalo?  Things every good competitor knows: believe in the impossible, show up to play every time, and never give up, no matter how many seconds are on the clock.  Sometimes, even the best competitors forget those things, or fail to execute, and get burned.  There are lessons in those burns.

Especially during exciting sports events like the NCAA Tournament, people use “battle language” to discuss competition, choosing verbs like beat, destroy, and clobber to describe how athletes perform.  But the word “compete” comes from a very different place.  Compete derives from the Latin competere, to seek together, which comes from the Latin com- + petere to come together, agree, to go to.  Competition in any arena, be it the basketball court or the classroom or the office, affords us the opportunity to strive together, with our teammates and opponents, to become better.

My daughter’s swim coach once told a roomful of parents, “Success and failure in athletics are fleeting, but habits and attitudes last a lifetime.”  Our society is obsessed with success and shies away from failure, but in the end, losses teach us much more than wins, and we shouldn’t dwell on either outcome too long.  A good competitor, and coach, always thinks about the next thing to work on, the next challenge to overcome.  I’m sure Tony Bennett is doing that right now.

Yes, the Madness has been extra crazy this year, but quite frankly, it’s more fun to watch.  So, forget the brackets and enjoy the spectacle of the arena, where perseverance is rewarded, adulation is tempered with humility, and everyone strives together toward something better.  Let’s go Loyola!

Are you caught up in March Madness?  What have you learned this year?

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Quirks of Famous Authors

With snow days and daylight savings time, the Word Nerd has had trouble being productive all week.  Can you feel my pain?  It’s just one hour of time shift… how has it caused this much damage to my energy levels?

To celebrate Friday, here is a fun and interesting Infographic about the quirks of famous authors, brought to you by Jack Milgram of Custom-Writing.org.

Jack Milgram is a writer at Custom-Writing.org. He started his freelance career when he was a student. Jack has been interested in writing since he first took pen and paper in his hands. And he never stopped writing ever after. He loves combining his job with traveling around the world.


Infographic by Jack Milgram Custom-Writing.Org

 

Thanks to Jack!  Do you know of any other famous author quirks?

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Handwriting vs. Typing: Which is Better?

In a world increasingly populated by keyboards and touch screens, some people think we don’t need handwriting any more. In fact, according to this Ted Talk by Jake Weidman, 41 out of 50 states no longer have handwriting curriculum in schools. Who needs cursive when you can dictate to Siri?

But hold on a minute! What about hand written notes, fun colored pens, and using paper and ink to scribble out ideas? Handwriting is a tool we need to learn and create, and so is typing. Instead of pitting these two methods of writing against each other, and potentially losing one, let’s appreciate each for the benefits it offers.

The difference between handwriting and typing

Handwriting and typing stimulate different parts of the brain, so really, one cannot replace the other. We still need both! The trick is knowing when to use each one. Clive Thompson writes about technology and its influence on people. In his Inbound talk, “How the way you write changes the way you think”, he cited a study which examined people taking notes via pen and paper versus typing. Turns out, the people who hand wrote notes remembered more from the lecture they heard than people who typed notes. Also, people who doodle while listening to someone speak remember more than those who don’t. (Yeah for all of those flowers in the margins of my notes!)

Why do writing and typing produce different results? Experts offer a number of reasons:

  • When we write by hand, we slow down, which encourages us to focus
  • Handwriting requires complicated, subtle muscle movements and activates the motor cortex of the brain.
  • Handwriting provides more varied tactile feedback than typing, which is a repetitive action with little variation.
  • Writing in cursive stimulates centers of the brain involved in reasoning
  • Handwriting notes requires the note taker to synthesize information; when people type notes, they often merely transcribe the information; they don’t interact with it.

Typing has some obvious advantages over writing, including speed and convenience. Typing allows us to express our ideas quickly, with less risk of losing them because our hands can’t keep up with our thoughts. In fact, the faster a person can type, the better his or her writing is. It’s also easier to edit while typing in a word processing program.

In summary, Thompson suggested that if you want to absorb information and brain storm “big picture” ideas, handwriting is the tool you need. However, if you want to produce content, like blog posts, then typing is the way to go.

My writing habits and tools

A friend once teased me for taking three pages of notes during a school board meeting, but I always do because it helps me pay attention and remember what I’ve heard. Even if I never look at those notes again, writing them forces me to interact with, and therefore remember, important information.

If I’m brainstorming about a column, blog post, or novel, I write my notes and ideas by hand. I do a better job of generating and organizing thoughts on paper, and I have notebooks for each of my writing projects. Thanks to Austin Kleon’s blog post “Notebook Turduken”, I now carry a small notepad in my purse to jot down ideas and transfer to relevant notebooks later. For writing and other creative tasks, I use Pilot Precise roller ball pens in fun colors like purple, green, or blue. These pens flow smoothly and don’t smear too badly. They also have a nice fine point, which I prefer. I also like to use Sharpie pens and Paper Mate Flairs for short writing tasks and notes.

Once I have a basic plan for the piece I’m going to write, I type it in Scrivener. This act of transferring my ideas via typing is basically a first round of editing, although, at this stage, I try to write freely, without analyzing my words. (It doesn’t always work.) If I get stumped, I go back to the pens– ideas come more readily when I let ink flow on paper. After I write a first draft, I let it marinate for a while, then I come back and edit, which is much easier while typing.

Scrivener is an excellent tool for collecting and organizing my thoughts for a large project, like a novel. There’s a binder down the left side of the program screen where I create notebooks for the various parts of my project, like background research, themes/motifs, and chapters. For my latest novel, I created chapters based on plot points that I could see in the binder, and then I typed the content of each chapter into the editor. Scrivener allowed me to create freely within an overarching structure, and I wrote the first draft of my second novel so much faster because of this.

I also love Evernote, a digital note keeping app that captures ideas across multiple devices. I can type in original notes or save articles and photos from the Internet into notebooks organized by subject. This tool is great for collecting material for blog posts and columns.

If you want to learn more about handwriting, check out these articles and videos:

What are your favorite tools and habits for writing? How do you use typing and handwriting differently depending on the task you are doing?

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The Benefits of Handwriting vs Typing - Infographic

When to Use Regimen v. Regiment

regimen v regiment

English is a tough language. Many words sound or look the same but have very different meanings. Recently, I’ve heard/seen regimen and regiment used interchangeably in conversations and in articles , and I had to clear up the confusion. They come from the same Latin root, which probably contributes to the problem.

Regimen: noun, from the Latin regimen, meaning rule or government; derived from the Latin regere, to lead straight or to rule

  • A structured plan, such as a diet, exercise routine, or medication, especially one used to improve or maintain someone’s health
  • A regular course of action, especially rigorous training; example: Olympic athletes follow a strict training regimen
  • Government, rule

 

U.S. Army Capt. Joseph Driskell, commander of Company A, 1st Battalion, 504th Parachute Infantry Regiment, describes the actions his paratroopers should take if fired upon by insurgents in their upcoming patrol Aug. 1, 2012, in Ghazni, Afghanistan. The battalion is part of the 82nd Airborne Division’s 1st Brigade Combat Team. (U.S. Army photo by Capt. Thomas Cieslak, Task Force 1-82 PAO) US Army via Flickr CC-BY

Regiment: from the Latin regimentum, from regimen

Noun:

  • A military unit consisting of a number of battalions (battalion = large group, a military company composed of a headquarters and two or more companies)
  • Archaic: governmental rule

Verb:

  • To form or assign into a regiment
  • To organize rigidly for the sake of control
  • To subject to order or uniformity, example: She carefully regiments her son’s diet.

Word Nerd tip

Regimen is always a noun, and is basically a routine or plan.  Regiment either describes a military group or is a verb.  For more details, visit Merriam-Webster.

Word Nerd Workout

Choose the right word in the following sentences.

  1. Her coach gave her a training regimen/regiment for her vacation.
  2. The article criticized the school district’s plan to regimen/regiment extracurricular activities.
  3. Sarah has started a new regimen/ regiment to get her blood pressure under control.

Have you struggled with regimen and regiment?  What word pairs give you trouble?

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